I could have sworn that I commented on this already....:S
anyway, I really dont like the BG render. it doesnt really fit IMO. Maybe replace it wit something bigger, and something that makes it flow better?
one of your bests. However, 2 things i notice.
Background is too plain, maybe a texture would look better
I LOVE the text/circle dissolve thing, but i think you should also carry that effect over to the render, to kind of make it match and stick out less
other than that, great job
this is amazing.
just dont like the pixelation, and the text could (possibly?) be in a better spot.
Love the coloring and love the lighting.
Especially love the font choice