It was a pretty LQ & oversharpened pic to start with, so i had to vivacity it, or it would look <Censored>
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_fLAl1U58F-k/SwbLkmrAawI/AAAAAAAABZk/O_m-YKIc3FM/s1600/luongo+trade.jpg
im not sure if its the font, or the size rather.
generally, when making paragraph/multi line sentences, you should try varying the sizes and opacity, to draw attention to key words/phrases, instead of keeping it all the same size, which is a tad plain
not bad, text is an improvement, but the big bright spots take away from the focal. Try making them dimmer or removing them, and then bring the text lower and to the left a bit. but KIU, especially with the text work
Just saw this today, sorry mate
Anyways, i love all the effects and coloring and whatnot here. However, its the text that brings this down. i think that quote or subtext or w/e is too big in size, and a smaller font, though it would be harder to read, would suit this mroe. Other than the text...