Tashard Choice(My 1st Cut)

[getyappcrnredy24]

Only my first, I did a couple yesterday and I'm going to post them in a second.
Just looking to get better at this.

Dont ask about the line, GIMP is a POS and did that on its own..

 

[jarrod2323]

u left bg between his arms and body -- round off arms more

 

[vikesfan]

Yep, and don't be afraid to cut a little deeper into the render, you can see a thin line of white along the whole left side.