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V1


V2 (thanks jarrod for the tip!)


c'n'c :)
 

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I like the bg but you should have put the render more central.
 

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contrast is a bit off on this .. gives it a cloudy feel.
try playing with it some to bring out the darks more - will help with depth
lighting behind AP is off, too. try to focus the lighting on a focal point - for instance, he's looking up and to the right - that would be ideal spot for it to lean towards, so maybe a bright spot on his right shoulder
 

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contrast is a bit off on this .. gives it a cloudy feel.
try playing with it some to bring out the darks more - will help with depth
lighting behind AP is off, too. try to focus the lighting on a focal point - for instance, he's looking up and to the right - that would be ideal spot for it to lean towards, so maybe a bright spot on his right shoulder
thanks v2 added ;)
 

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I really like it. Maybe move the text closer, and make it more readable. Nice job.
 

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Move the text to the left some, and change the font of it, and it'd be better.
NJ
 

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