Patty Kane

[HTF]

V1 -

V2-

CnC Please.

 

[Nucker]

face is too animated, darken the bg.

 

[HTF]

V2 added...

 

[tenacious]

Good job on v2. Something about this is off but I dunno what.

 

[fletch]

Pretyy solid.

 

[jarrod2323]

I'm thinking the Kane font color should better match the splatter color? and possibly move text down a tad. the flow is a slight downward left to right angle based on the render position of his mouth