Mos Def

[JUNX]

 

[playmaker7]

The second one I like better

Text is meh and the background looks like it needs more to me

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

Lose that thing on the right, and stop using the Sprayed Strokes thing. You use it everytime. And change the text. Rest is alright.

 

[STLZACH]

dont change the text, i love that.

 

[Pugz]

bg needs a lot more, but v2 is best.