Mary J. Blige

[X-Factor]

To start off, wutup guys, i know its been a while since I've been on SI. Anyways, since I'm on SI, i tried to mess wit photoshop for no reason like usual, leaving it textless for now

V1

V2

 

[NjNets15]

eh, not bad but there isn't enough going on, and there really isnt a focal render, they are different but not one of them really sticks out as the one we are supposed to look at, and the lack of text is definitely a turn off

Don't take it harshly, tryna help you improve

 

[Mexi]

its not that bad
some counterclockwise vertical text would be cool in between the renders
i likve V1