Kid Cudi

[Ghettoshark]

 

[jarrod2323]

i think the 2nd render would look better placed to left of the main. also, you're missing some lighting to help with the focal
but render effects and text aren't bad at all .. very good start

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

I agree with Jarrod
maybe flip the render so you see his face on his left shoulder(well, our left)
then move the text down and to the left more
and add an exposure at the end

 

[TTN2810]

What they said, except i dont like the "Cudi" text.