Jordan Hill

[LinebackerU_31]

V2

V3

v4

CnC Please!

 

[jarrod2323]

love the blending and bg.

maybe switch colors of the text? make blue white, and vice versa.
also, his eye in the bg is low.. the flow is offset by that a tad -- maybe move higher?

 

[LinebackerU_31]

V2,V3 added

 

[jarrod2323]

v2 - maybe some lighting over the last part of the text for flow?

 

[Pugz]

Good work I like all of them, but you need to work on making good stuff more consistently.

 

[LinebackerU_31]

Good work I like all of them, but you need to work on making good stuff more consistently.

yeah im either a hit or a miss

 

[LinebackerU_31]

v4 is up

 

[- J é -]

V1 for me i really like the text on this onne and the blur GJ