Fresh out the oven

[MisterMischief]

Tell me what you think, thank you!

 

[dakid]

text is great=pic effects bad

 

[MisterMischief]

text is great=pic effects bad

How to improve??

 

[A.E]

Wow, not bad. Your definitely better than a lot of the others that come here looking for help.

I'd give you advice...but I really don't have much to say as I am still on the learning path myself.

I would just encourage you to keep playing around, keep making gfx, talk to some of our guys, and you will get better and better.

GFX Team Apprentice right here.

 

[dakid]

try making the player the focal point..right now im too distracted by the background

 

[MisterMischief]

How would I go about doing that?

 

[Digital_Viking]

i like the player of choice lol. EJ is a beast!

try making the player stick out more from the background. Try adding an effect on the background like blur it a little bit and erase what looks good. Mess with gradient maps and all that good stuff too. If this is one of your first, then your much better than when i started out lol.
Tuts helped me a lot, try and find some, theyre everywhere.
Good Job though man

 

[MisterMischief]

Any better?
BTW, thank you for all your guy's input!