Dan Hamhuis

[Star King3]

Here is my career render #2

 

[kuley]

You're getting better. There's still some BG in some places but no where near as much as before. You also missed some in the ear loops, but for sure you're getting better.

here's the void with instructions http://www.sportzin.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=25195

 

[Star King3]

I'll go through and fix everything, theres some BG on the glove and ear loop, but where else do you see some?


EDIT- Here is the original if you want to check anything, cause for me some non BG looks/looked like BG on the render

http://elibrary3.bigchalk.com/elibweb/elib/do/document?urn=urn:bigchalk:US;BCLib;document;187064687

 

[ryanmg]

Missed the spot on the right side of his helmet.

 

[Star King3]

edited original to replace with edited version and added the void.

NYJ, I think that may be his hair, but I cut it out anyway.

 

[Phil The Thrill]

Better than your first. The only thing I don't like is how bumpy the right skate is.

 

[Star King3]

Better than your first. The only thing I don't like is how bumpy the right skate is.

And here adds the next thing that has been fixed in version 3.0, original is edited.

 

[kuley]

Actuallly, i suppose it's not BG, it's just like the dark outline kinda thing around the render. usually i just get rid of it, but i guess it can stay.

 

[Star King3]

so is there anything else that this needs? or is it actually good enough?

 

[kuley]

I think it's good enough. Good job, keep working on it and stay active

 

[Star King3]

So it missed the round of adding, so that likely means it needs fixing, what do I fix?

 

[Phil The Thrill]

Looks good, but here are some things I would fix/change:

- Skate still looks a little bumpy
- There is a bit of a black outline around the stick.
- The helmet needs to be cleaned up. A little bit of a thin outline of BG.

 

[Star King3]

Version #1243235645076509423529058320942845

 

[Star King3]

Updated again, did a bit of clean up work.

 

[kuley]

added finally, good job.