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Sick render effects, but the BG needs more and the text is meh
 

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The text might be the best part (except for what it says)
 

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the half circle at the top looks bad, lower the opacity. what i do when i do that is take a soft brush and erase the bottom then blur the circle, that way it doesnt get so sharp and makes it look a little better. the text isnt too bad but could be a little better.

good work though, i like it.
 

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get rid of the smoky stock over his right shoulder destroys the flow imo
 

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or just set it on dodge so it works as lighting.
 

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i would say get rid of the smoky instead of putting it on dodge.
 

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it looks better imo, maybe even add some reddish brushing on screen around the render to add some colored lighting.
 

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