Cristiano Ronaldo

[mg91]

This is my first draft for a competition on the United forum I'm on.

How can I make it better?

v1

v2

v3

v4

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[snipezo]

Change the text and I'm not really big on the stock at the bottom left corner. Other than that it's pretty cool.

 

[mg91]

Change the text and I'm not really big on the stock at the bottom left corner. Other than that it's pretty cool.

All the text? Or just the first name?

 

[snipezo]

All of it. Try a textless version as well.

 

[mg91]

All of it. Try a textless version as well.

Alright trying some stuff now.

Just to clarify, was it the font or the way I applied it you didn't like?

 

[snipezo]

The font

 

[The Guid]

if you do textless, I'd make the main Ronaldo render bigger

 

[mg91]

Any better? I'll add to the 1st post for easier comparison

 

[snipezo]

A little better but try the font that u used for your Rooney avy.

 

[mg91]

Okay added 2 more.

 

[EaglesUK]

V4 is brilliant man. Love it. Tone down the lighting just a little, bit too bright.

 

[mg91]

Cheers I'll try and tone down the lighting when I go to put the logo in...

That's a challenge in itself lol

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

v4 may be your best, very nice work man