positives:
-mad creative
-text works
-glowing edges effect is nice
negatives:
-render looks LQ
-render needs to be brought out more
-glowing edges effects looks bad in some spots
personally i think it looks good but i wonder if it would look any better with the main text(the black part) colored a dark red and maybe his jersey and helmet in color with the rest like it is.
all i did was change the text. not sure if you like it any better or not though. i tried the colored player(the uniform not him) and it didnt work with the strokes so i just used the colored text