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[jordan888]

yay or nay?

v2

 

[Blake]

Sig = Yay

User-name spelling =/= yay

 

[fletch]

I diggg this, and is this jordan888 (i think) off sportsgfx, if so this is fletch.

 

[jordan888]

I diggg this, and is this jordan888 (i think) off sportsgfx, if so this is fletch.

yoo man, long time no see
how ya been?

 

[snipezo]

Is she like a porn star 'a something?

 

[jordan888]

yar

 

[mg91]

I don't like the text, but other than that this is sick.

Glad you found your way here mate.

 

[jarrod2323]

text flow is what I think is wrong -- look at the way the render is positioned with the eye flow. you want your viewer to seamlessly move through the artwork, and right now you look from the render to the right, then have to go back to the left to see the text.

you don't want the viewer to look all over but just look from one direction to the next easily

 

[jordan888]

v2 is up with muuch better text

 

[fletch]

yoo man, long time no see
how ya been?

You've gotten better since last time I saw your work, stay active here it's a good site

 

[jordan888]

You've gotten better since last time I saw your work, stay active here it's a good site

thanks, will do

 

[mg91]

Muuuuuch better.