A collab

[boubabi]

My First Part

 
Jackim's Part

 
My Final Part

 

[Oiler35]

To be honest, I like your start the best. The blurring on the duplicated render make it look ridiculous, and takes away from the main focal point. 

 

[Pugz]

the blur doesn't work a whole lot, like sam said. im not sold on the blue mono tone either.

 

[bosoxlover12]

Each following version is worst than the prior z v1>v2>v3

 

[buzzy]

I agree, I really like the shapes and the background in v1, which got lost in the process.

 

[deeba]

Yeah v1 is the best

 

[footballplaya52]

start was dope but buddy killed the vibe

 

[elusive]

I would get rid of the second render all together.