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Concept is really nice, execution is lacking a bit
 
• Text definitely could be re-worked (although that's the area I definitely struggle with as well)
• Blurring effect kinda just made it look LQ, rather than blurred. I'd either amplify it more or remove it altogether
• I would also mask out the non-Davis/AK parts too. I like the dark blue vibes and the yellow distracts from that (especially with it being in the center)
• Photo is also definitely over-exposed in a lot of areas
 
 
keep up the workload, and just try to improve with each and every piece. it takes time, but you have good visual foundations. 
 

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bosoxlover12 said:
Concept is really nice, execution is lacking a bit
 
• Text definitely could be re-worked (although that's the area I definitely struggle with as well)
• Blurring effect kinda just made it look LQ, rather than blurred. I'd either amplify it more or remove it altogether
• I would also mask out the non-Davis/AK parts too. I like the dark blue vibes and the yellow distracts from that (especially with it being in the center)
• Photo is also definitely over-exposed in a lot of areas
 
 
keep up the workload, and just try to improve with each and every piece. it takes time, but you have good visual foundations. 
 
 
 
Text is pretty hard for me and i'm not sure what to really do with it.
 

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