bosoxlover12 said:Concept is really nice, execution is lacking a bit
• Text definitely could be re-worked (although that's the area I definitely struggle with as well)
• Blurring effect kinda just made it look LQ, rather than blurred. I'd either amplify it more or remove it altogether
• I would also mask out the non-Davis/AK parts too. I like the dark blue vibes and the yellow distracts from that (especially with it being in the center)
• Photo is also definitely over-exposed in a lot of areas
keep up the workload, and just try to improve with each and every piece. it takes time, but you have good visual foundations.