not feeling it, It's too bright and washed out, not digging the text much either. If I were you, i'd try making the text drop shadow not so prominent...looks a bit noobish.
As I said on SGFXN, I think text is the main issue here. Now a couple months ago, you helped me improve massively on text. My turn, try to add some pop to it. It kinda seems a bit....idk, flat? I'm terrible at giving tips, but then again, you could also try looking at text tuts