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[playmaker7]

Text kills this. I think more could be done with the BG but you're def getting better

 

[STLZACH]

Text kills this. I think more could be done with the BG but you're def getting better

yea, i couldnt find anything to fit

 

[getyappcrnredy24]

Yeah, the idea of the bg was good, but try a different stock.
And the text needs some work too, try something smaller
Also looks kinda sharp to me.
But yes, you're getting better.