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[jordan888]

personally wasn't feeling much, but open to collabs to make this a lot better.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=TRMNBH0Z

 

[germany00]

Text isnt very good, and he is really lq and blurry

 

[NV]

I actually like it, I think it has a nice smooth appealing look to it.

 

[germany00]

lol i didnt notice that that wasnt the render, it was the background, ya its alright, not feeling the text still

 

[Pugz]

text is an issue and overall it could be better. its a solid start but you could tweek it a bit better. im also not a fan of the flipped render

 

[josueelcatracho]

hmmmm. Not what I expect from you dude. Text is mad whack.

 

[Barcode]

A few things. Lose the lighting flare and circle shape to the left side. Make Gretzky a bit more prominent and soft blur the background. Lose the small render on his jersey. Keep the text, but do not overlay it. LOVE the clean font choice, you can never go wrong with it.

 

[jordan888]

anyone wanna collab?