That's Childish

[JKnucks]

Inspired by some other works I've seen, and something I feel like has some potential but I got stuck on and wanted to see if someone wanted to collab

 

[Pugz]

the text is holding this back but otherwise it's really really nice

 

[BwareDWare94]

You want the text to stand out but not interfere with the image (or combination of images) too much.

 
I'm probably going to get shit for this, but I dig The Fray. This is a sig from one of my other forums. It's all about balance.

 

[youngguru]

lol your text layout is fine
 
just completely awful font choice/s
 
and crop that shit on the right side off... takes away from the focal

 

[JKnucks]

http://www.mediafire.com/download/9gegg947ojd468q/childishg.psd
 
There's the PSD if someone wants to throw down on this, change the text, do whatever the fuck you want i don't care. 
 
And there's nothing wrong with digging The Fray haha, some good chill ass music. 

 

[BwareDWare94]

http://www.mediafire.com/download/9gegg947ojd468q/childishg.psd
 
There's the PSD if someone wants to throw down on this, change the text, do whatever the fuck you want i don't care. 
 
And there's nothing wrong with digging The Fray haha, some good chill ass music. 

 
I'll forewarn you. Their newest song "Love Don't Die" has a completely different sound. I hope it's not a sign of what's to come from them . I love me some good piano rock, and they have two fantastic vocalists.