I'm going to comment this one but this applies to everything I've seen from you.
I should ahve commented one of the other ones really, but anyway, my problem is, this one aside all your works look the same. And even here the only real diff is the colours.
But this one is decent, at least it has some colouring going on and some blending.
Try and work on your stock work and text man, take advantage of the resources here.