Micah Owings

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hmmm...render effects are good, but I don't like the text. Maybe try something to blend the render in more with the background?
 

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- Render effects
- Lighting

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- Too grainy, kills the outcome
- Text isn't working
- Get rid of your username in the lower left, its too much a newbie thing to do.
 

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- Render effects
- Lighting

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- Too grainy, kills the outcome
- Text isn't working
- Get rid of your username in the lower left, its too much a newbie thing to do.
what kind of text would you reccommend
 

jarrod2323

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- BG blur
- Lighting
- render (maybe move down a tad or enlarge canvas so the cap logo shows

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- white stock makes it look too flushed out
- text effects and/or color - white color would help with flow balance. effects like shapes or simple type like ^^^ +++ around it could work
- user tag. it's not so much of an issue like when you used to be super active. Style seems to be the character of the artist now
 

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I did these but my text iis struggling



 

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I don't like the multiple colors around his face and all.
 

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v4 and I'm feeling this one
 

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v4 is much better, nice job taking everyone's criticism, and improving it. Not bad.
 

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