I'm not very good

[damien]

Hey guys, first post here I guess. I'm not very good at graphics, but I'm working on it. I made this one and have gotten some guidance so far, but could use plenty more.

CnC.

 

[DJT]

The text is really bad, the rest isn't too bad. Thats a weird picture of that guy though.

 

[Oiler35]

Trying lowering the contrast a bit, then adding a blue gradient map over the background for colouring.