Hossa

[Mr.Baller]

 
 
I'm not feelin it , seems like something is missing

 

[ambivalentSoul]

do you know what a hossa is? is american for a pig.
 

 
for reals, though. I like the render area. But the problem with this is there's only one hue. You need some other colors going on to make it interesting. It's a little over contrasted too which make sit looks lq. Also with the text — you have a lot on there and it's all treated the same (color, blending mode, etc). Try to make the main text stand out a little more somehow.

 

[Mr.Baller]

Would you like to finish it if I send you the psd ?

 

[Mr. Smiley]

I kinda like it, and the text is great I can tell you have skills on that.

 

[Phil The Thrill]

I like this a lot actually.
 
I would like to see it with his actual name though.