Gotta keep training that text game, brosox. This is mixed graphical arts. Your BG game could be strong. Your border game could be strong. You could really do some damage with some sick ass stock work, but if your text game is weak, you gettin' choked out, boi
i would have tried to darken the whole thing up at the end. like a desat layer on overlay with low opacity. just to mute the washed out look a tad. youre improving every week so thats good. i like this. except the text.