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http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/019...y_jordan888.png mhmmmm v2 http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/020...y_jordan888.png

text and coloring is bad. rest is decent

move the render to the right side, fix the text and erase the bottom part of the reflection. rest is nice

i was simply mentioning it, not directing it at you no need ot get all pissy on me

a bit too washed out, and no clear focal point tbh. needs a good sharpen as well

sliced juice is so whored out now... nice lighting though, text is aight on v1

sexy lighting sexy stock work sexy text sexy

you really should start putting your sigs in the Signatures section, youll get more views, and thats where theyre supposed to go anyway

loving the render effects, not the text. to me its ok. but it fills up too much space, and the stroke around it sucks. gj with everything else

i like this, but i dont like how its 2 different people and 2 different render sizes. thats what bugs me. also, i think it would look better in a blue tint, rather than that yellow brown ish color.

you bursted my bubble. mind sharing the stock? anyways, this is ill. the creativity here is ace. no complaints.

sick lighting, sick effects. text? not so much. both versions have weak(ish) text, i like the v1 text more though. just not the sizing of it, because its too hard to read, and also, not close enough to the face. always try keeping text close to the focal

unlike the others, i like the brightness here. thats just me. what i dont like is the text, or more specifically, the Bush text. thats my only problem

as mg said, there looks to be too much threshold. i personally like the colors here, although could do with less of the bright white on the right

too washed out to me. burn the edges some, and i personally would move the text offcentered a bit

v2 is better, but the render is over contrasted. i think that theres too many stocks in it as well, because it looks a bit busy. not digging the poopish coloring in it, but i like the blending of the render in the background

the gaines sig is sick, although it looks a bit over topazed. i love the render effects so much the manning sig looks a tad washed out. maybe add a bit of contrast to it? and text is the same as the gaines one, im not sure if you wanted it that way or not, but maybe try varying a bit? btw, what...

i love this as well. no complaints other than the fact its kid cudi >_<

added a v2

did you follow a tut or freehand it?"